View Full Version : Suggestions/Thoughts on Novel Idea?

November 25th, 2014, 06:22 PM
So I really enjoy writing and I recently decided to expand a short story I wrote a while back into a novel. I would really like to hear you thoughts and suggestions on my idea of the plot basic plot. Thank you!

It's about a futuristic society in an alternate universe where many regions (we shall call them states) have joined to diminish the weaker, more peaceful, utopian-like state. This state, being inexperienced with violence and warfare/etc, create the universe we know on a supercomputer (so we exist only in a computer).
Three people from this state (or "soldiers") are selected after observation and put into the universe and simulated as each human being that ever has or will exist and collect all of humanity's wisdom, knowledge, and understanding as well as memories. All of this is used to help the state fight in an upcoming war... (insert twist here/ending)

That's as condensed as I could make it, sorry it's so long. :)

December 14th, 2014, 08:11 PM
My question, who's the protaganist? What is his/her goal?