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Saint of Sinners
November 13th, 2014, 04:44 AM
Well, after sitting here for a bit I felt like I wanted to write a poem. So there, my thought up on the spot, probably crappy poem about...I don't know...let's do caterpillars.

CATERPILLARS

A myriad of many feet,
Climbing on the leaves.
I think they're kinda creepy,
How the hell to they breathe?

They eat and chew and swallow and grow,
Till they form a chrysalis.
That is if they don't get eaten,
another insect's feast.

Why do they even exist?
Isn't it kinda strange?
Why isn't it born a butterfly?
Free to fly about it's range.

Though they might be squishy,
I think they're kinda cute.
When they pupate and are all grown up,
they really are a beaut.

yeah...that's it.

Hideous
December 15th, 2014, 02:12 PM
I really like this poem, "Why isn't it born a butterfly? Free to fly about it's range." is my favorite line, it has me hanging with all sorts of questions to ask. Great job!

Saint of Sinners
December 17th, 2014, 11:25 AM
I really like this poem, "Why isn't it born a butterfly? Free to fly about it's range." is my favorite line, it has me hanging with all sorts of questions to ask. Great job!

I honestly never intended it to be deep. You must be really sharp to be able to pick that up :P

amgb
December 18th, 2014, 09:03 PM
Haha I love this poem

Alexwellace
December 20th, 2014, 07:42 PM
I loved it, it was so random. I do enjoy the poems that make you think, but sometimes i just want to read something that rhymes, says what it means, and is fun to say! Which is exactly what this was. In exchange, i offer you a random poem that bounced off of yours!

Ratata

Often forgotten, but never unloved,
You are my favourite pokemon,
As you are, unevolved.

With Hyper Fang and Quick Attack,
you're really the one to beat,
although you may be a normal type,
you'll always be special to me.

Oak tells me catch em' all,
but i'll always be happy with you,
Me & you can beat the world,
Say strong Ratata, stay You.

maniamsmart
December 22nd, 2014, 04:32 AM
I loved it, it was so random. I do enjoy the poems that make you think, but sometimes i just want to read something that rhymes, says what it means, and is fun to say! Which is exactly what this was. In exchange, i offer you a random poem that bounced off of yours!

Ratata

Often forgotten, but never unloved,
You are my favourite pokemon,
As you are, unevolved.

With Hyper Fang and Quick Attack,
you're really the one to beat,
although you may be a normal type,
you'll always be special to me.

Oak tells me catch em' all,
but i'll always be happy with you,
Me & you can beat the world,
Say strong Ratata, stay You.

I love the OP's poem and this one, you guys are really good. I never fully understood poetry, but this something that seemed like it came out of a book I used to read in high school where the teacher tells you to read this poem, so I think you guys did a great job!

SethfromMI
December 30th, 2014, 08:13 PM
I like it :)