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devotionnel
February 17th, 2017, 06:13 PM
If you're reading this, I hope you had/will have a good day today :) I just spontaneously wrote this little piece and thought it'd be better in this forum :)

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Breathe. You survived another day on Earth, well done fighter.
Another day towards a better day, when things will be brighter.
And even though you feel like you've reached the end of your tether,
There will be a time where you've pulled yourself together.

Think. This time a year ago, did you expect to be where you are now?
Are things for better or for worse? You really must disallow
With all your strength not to get as low as you once were,
And to be the best that you could ever be, if you prefer.

Wait. The improvements won't just happen overnight,
You have to be patient, and for the time to be right.
And in a year or two or more from now, you may just see
That you are the best that you could ever be.

Amethyst Rose
February 17th, 2017, 07:04 PM
That is so beautiful, I love it :heart: this should be stickied.

Think. This time a year ago, did you expect to be where you are now?

Never...
Are things for better or for worse? You really must disallow
With all your strength not to get as low as you once were,
And to be the best that you could ever be, if you prefer.

Better in every aspect :)

Wait. The improvements won't just happen overnight,
You have to be patient, and for the time to be right.
And in a year or two or more from now, you may just see
That you are the best that you could ever be.

There are so many people I care about who I wish would realize this and it couldn't be more true. This made my day.

devotionnel
February 18th, 2017, 02:49 AM
That is so beautiful, I love it :heart: this should be stickied.

There are so many people I care about who I wish would realize this and it couldn't be more true. This made my day.

Thank you so much :) I definitely did have the people I care about in mind too when I wrote this, as if it was like a letter to them to say that it's all going to be okay :)

IzzyB
March 25th, 2017, 10:15 AM
Very cool poem :) We all need to follow this sort of advice, and you phrased it very nicely!

Nadin
June 19th, 2017, 04:44 PM
Very nice,I love it.

Endeavour
June 19th, 2017, 05:01 PM
Very nice,I love it.

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