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dot6622
February 1st, 2017, 09:58 PM
On nights like these,
things can never go well it seems
So raw and exposed
are my thoughts that should always have been closed
You are supposed to be my friend
The one there till the "end"
But maybe
just maybe you actually are the end
Just there to lend a hand
There to destroy me
All that matters is the he
No thought to the possible fee
The fee that was my heart
That you threw away in a shopping cart
Always there to rot
I never should have even fought
The line must be drawn
Before I lie dead on the lawn
What I am trying to say is that the line is here
Please don't ever try to come near it again

idefineme
February 2nd, 2017, 09:26 PM
I'm sorry to hear you are in pain if you need some to talk to, i hope if you need i can help ease your pain or there is someone who you will let help you. Feel better.

Phosphene
February 2nd, 2017, 10:40 PM
I appreciate you sharing that. It's a very personal piece of writing; I commend you for putting it out there.

TheSmokingMan
February 5th, 2017, 02:19 PM
Very moving

Space Delta
February 11th, 2017, 12:31 PM
My God.
Thanks for sharing.