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WhoWhatWhen
January 28th, 2017, 06:26 PM
Title: All mistakes happen in January

All mistake happen in January.

You were born in January.
On one snowy evening you were suddenly alive
on this cold Earth who's temperature is rising.
You didn't know what was coming.

The man you once called father.
He harassed you.
He told you that you were a piece of shit, scum, worthless.
He said you did nothing
when you were the only one doing something.
He feasted on the open stab wounds
he had just made in your heart.

He came into your life one cold January morning.
He said he loved you.
He kept you warm for the night.
You woke up colder than the morning before.

You left too, in this month.
Your body hugged the air as you were pushed off the highest building
from all the insults and wounds you wore on your mind.
"Scum" they murmured as you fell from
The Building as fast as the snow fell from the dark,
night sky.

Amethyst Rose
January 28th, 2017, 06:55 PM
That was a sad poem ;-; thank you for sharing it. February is almost here :)

Anniebanannie
January 28th, 2017, 08:14 PM
That was intense! I really loved the title. It makes you think.

Just JT
January 29th, 2017, 08:15 AM
Good job. You exprkess d yourself well