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West Coast Sheriff
February 14th, 2016, 12:39 PM
Eh, another poem I've written. I haven't thought of a title yet.

Playing with fire,
Dancing with lions,
The adrenaline rushes through me
As she walks near.
Swimming with sharks,
Walking alone at night,
I can smell her perfume
reach through the air.
Looking off buildings,
Running in subways,
I can't belief how close she is.
Running red lights,
Blowing through stop signs,
I feel the excitement of a queen walking within proximity.
I'll stick my hand out
As if grabbing for rain,
But by that time she has left.
She's just a normal woman.
But to me, she's a celebrity.
I've shaken hands with singers, athletes and politicians.
None have ever known a more beautiful presence.

As always, feedback is appreciated.

February 14th, 2016, 08:34 PM
Very nice. Very nice imagery. The last 4 lines are beautiful. I don't have a lot to say, sorry haha.