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Mars
November 17th, 2015, 09:27 PM
So yeah... Got a few songs down (still need to record them and shit), got a name, got a album cover for it figured out... just gotta drop it :P BTW trying to keep the curses to a minimum cuz it feels weird to curse around my parents...

But anyway wrote some fire that I'm def gonna put on it:

The Beat (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5UVr6aFDSc)

verse 1:
It's all about respect
And okay... Maybe money too
I will only sell dope Cuz the smoking's what I'll never do
Alright
Maybe every once in a while
But I swear that the narcotics Is only so I can smile
I will carve my own face Like I'm the god damn Joker
Heads or tails, You can choose
Put your god damn vote in
And you know you hit the cypher But you're god damn choking
Make you cough your own words Like your first time smoking
Throw a gas mask on And I'll light up bottles
You can light your own bones But it can't be fossils
I don't deal old school, I only make it better
You know they said that money's coming
But I made my own cheddar
And I slice that shit nice Like a piece of prosciutto (don't say the o)
You know that once the deal is done
Glasses up, Salut
And you know that this homie Ain't never gonna see a jail
I'm going prepped into these streets Like Black Friday sales
I will light a fool up Cuz you know that I'm strapped
Ordered so much weed And like 10 of these gats
Got them Yankees hats Cuz I'm busting caps
Got that dope ass pussy Taking long cat naps
Making these fools blind With all this light
Giving third degree burns From all this fire
And you call these streets cold Well you're god damn right
But I got that body heat Keep relations tight
I will write my own book With one hundred chapters
Got Ben Frank on the cover cuz the Money is a factor
Need to pay the publisher For those long term services
But I'm using up the cash For medicinal purposes
Smoking blunts
That's a permanent

hook -
And they say that money's coming But that's a damn lie
Had to make my own stacks With that short supply
And they say that money's coming Well to tell you the truth
Got that money in my pocket
In my mouth a gold tooth(x2)

Paul. Yooo fam feel free to join in on this boii. Ik u spit some fire shit fam

Bontigo Papi .
November 18th, 2015, 12:13 PM
Dope beat, I'll have my verse by the next day ? Got studying duties okay ?

Mars
November 18th, 2015, 02:18 PM
Dope beat, I'll have my verse by the next day ? Got studying duties okay ?
Yeahh bro lol no rush no hurry

Southside
November 18th, 2015, 11:02 PM
Your boy spittin straight fire with the wordplay
Use to move weight on the A train in Rockaway
No flight 587, sending these kids to heaven
But yo I got a confession, call it the Great Depression
No jobs, but i serve you bums up like Salvation Army
NYPD trying to get at me? Bitch hardly
If the party dont got barcardi, shit, we fucking leaving
Brooklyn niggas stay thieving.

Thats all I got...

Btw thats a long ass verse, i'd chop it up a bit.

Bontigo Papi .
November 19th, 2015, 06:46 AM
(Verse 2)
They called the nigga with the gold slugs
Just be glad that I showed up
All this heartbreak got me dying lately
So I got a gold tooth to keep me shining lately
I ain't one to quote Drake, but I
Sure knows how it feels , and I
I know I hurt you a lot right?
But saying sorry ain't enough right?
Spent your late nights on the phone
Now ya all alone, sitting at home
I know I messed up, could I help it?
I was lovestruck, with a tint of blindness
She got caught up in the negative
And I'm just tryna bring her back to the positive
She rejected me, told me she has someone
I can assure you, that nigga ain't the one
When all you had was loss and regret
I gave you everything, all my love and respect
That wasn't enough, so I put you in the spotlight
Stupid, should've kept you in my limelight
Now I'm, I'm just sulking in my words
But I'm, I'm doing good if ya never heard
I always think about you, wonder how you are
To me, you'll always be my star
A bit cheesy? Yeah I know
A romantic nigga hasn't lost his flow
I changed, fuck my old ways
I changed, just so you could stay
If you need me , I'm just a phone call away
And if you wanna ride, just call the valet.

Sorry if its too deep and shit lol.

Mars
November 19th, 2015, 07:57 AM
Your boy spittin straight fire with the wordplay
Use to move weight on the A train in Rockaway
No flight 587, sending these kids to heaven
But yo I got a confession, call it the Great Depression
No jobs, but i serve you bums up like Salvation Army
NYPD trying to get at me? Bitch hardly
If the party dont got barcardi, shit, we fucking leaving
Brooklyn niggas stay thieving.

Thats all I got...

Btw thats a long ass verse, i'd chop it up a bit.
lol dope shit nice. And yea it's just the way I wrote it tho. I chopped up the bars by syllables and did it like that so it seems a lot longer than it actually is. I'll fix it tho

Mars
November 19th, 2015, 08:02 AM
(Verse 2)
They called the nigga with the gold slugs
Just be glad that I showed up
All this heartbreak got me dying lately
So I got a gold tooth to keep me shining lately
I ain't one to quote Drake, but I
Sure knows how it feels , and I
I know I hurt you a lot right?
But saying sorry ain't enough right?
Spent your late nights on the phone
Now ya all alone, sitting at home
I know I messed up, could I help it?
I was lovestruck, with a tint of blindness
She got caught up in the negative
And I'm just tryna bring her back to the positive
She rejected me, told me she has someone
I can assure you, that nigga ain't the one
When all you had was loss and regret
I gave you everything, all my love and respect
That wasn't enough, so I put you in the spotlight
Stupid, should've kept you in my limelight
Now I'm, I'm just sulking in my words
But I'm, I'm doing good if ya never heard
I always think about you, wonder how you are
To me, you'll always be my star
A bit cheesy? Yeah I know
A romantic nigga hasn't lost his flow
I changed, fuck my old ways
I changed, just so you could stay
If you need me , I'm just a phone call away
And if you wanna ride, just call the valet.

Sorry if its too deep and shit lol.
Nah fam all good :D this shit needed some feels (besides the few lines that could go way deeper)

Bontigo Papi .
November 19th, 2015, 08:21 AM
Nah fam all good :D this shit needed some feels (besides the few lines that could go way deeper)

Drake inspires me so some of my stuff is kinda deep.