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Cognizant
February 22nd, 2013, 02:00 AM
Pretty shitty, but I was bored, so I decided to "redo" the San Francisco MTA/Muni logo and slogan. Here's the original...
http://www.sfmta.com/cms/img/ui/sfmta.gif

And here's mine:
http://i.imgur.com/N0aJoYB.png

Better? Worse? Comments? Insults? I want to hear :)

It's best seen in the black and gold theme, because there's a faint glow around the "MTA", which I thought fit because the mta website is dark.

Skyline
February 22nd, 2013, 09:49 PM
I think its a lot better! The original is dark and doesn't draw much attention, but the revamped version just catches my eye... It makes me want to take the time to read it... Its really nice. Great job!

MediaJordan
April 10th, 2013, 04:46 AM
I think that the blue makes it look a little childish, but it does stand out more. Just lacks professionalism that's all and can be improved with time :)

Cognizant
April 14th, 2013, 01:35 AM
I think that the blue makes it look a little childish, but it does stand out more. Just lacks professionalism that's all and can be improved with time :)

Hey man, while I do appreciate criticism, could you make it more constructive?