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Lithium
April 7th, 2007, 11:18 PM
Just take this away from me.
I need the relief, but I don't deserve the release.
I have to let it build up until it explodes
It'll happen sooner than you think, as the story goes.
Tick, tock, I'm still breathing
You just can't see it, and seeing is believing
Let it build up until I drop
The time is slipping away on the clock.
Don't give it back to me...
Try it yourself, and then you'll see.

MoveAlong
April 8th, 2007, 01:08 PM
Ohh that is neat :D

Mannequin
April 8th, 2007, 06:41 PM
Eh. the idea in general is really generic and I can't really follow your train of thought. It was pretty though.

Lithium
April 8th, 2007, 09:55 PM
Eh. the idea in general is really generic and I can't really follow your train of thought. It was pretty though.

...I can't follow it either...
pretty much...i got to thinking...typing...throwing words together and hitting 'submit thread'

thats pretty much it. :|

Ironic Infidel In England
April 9th, 2007, 03:54 AM
fairly good, but there are some better ones around here. ( no offence, this just isn't my style.)